This is the first storyboard we have created.
By Paige and Millie
Feedback
Positive - Good storyline, appropriate images and camera shots, very good titles and consistent music.
Improvements - A bit to complicated, try not to give to much away as its an opening it should be basic and also consider mise en scene.
We have taken the comments on board and would like to make the improvements suggested.
By Millie
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